Hopefully in order to get some feedback on the start of the novel I have decided to post a couple of chapters here.
I have allowed the comments feature on this page and would welcome any feedback.
Chapter One
Chapter Two
A little rewriting to these chapters… Decided to leave the focus of the novel until chapter four and just have the first three chapters and reminisced memories. Hopefully this establishes the central character more as it details some moments from his adolescence.
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The Novel
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